Sound Of Rain

Ushhhh, wzzzzzhhhh
The trees were swaying,
No birds were there
To fly in the air,
The leaves fell from the trees,
Rushing down in breeze,
Particles of sand, along with it went swooping.
 
Ushhhhhh, wzzzzzzzzhh
Shhhhhh, wzzzzzhhhh
Outside there was heavy sound of rain,
And all the birds together got huddled,
Little birds, within their mother’s wings cuddled,
It was not the actual sound of rain that everyone can hark,
It was the noise of the cicadas, that was heard in the dark,
From inside the trees, it made sound like rain, again and again.




Amazing

May 26, 2010

• And Stop at ten
• Sound Of Rain

Honorable Mention - Rather Wet

Aug 25, 2010

• Rain - Poetry
• Sound Of Rain

Reviews

[JENY]

wonderful…
Beautiful…
Amazing

[Rory CJ Frankson]

This is very beautiful. I can see why it has won awards. Excellent representation of the sound response. This was the aspect I felt most rewarded by....

Ro...

[deeps]

This is wonderful, and lovely,
I love the sound of rain myself

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Beautiful!!