Lonely :(

The days went fast and fast as it could,
I know that God does it all for good,
No more fun, not even a single laugh,
Feel left behind, just like the lost calf,
Not a single one to hold my hand,
Feel like left back in a lonely island,
I'm alone sadly roaming with tears, 
Kept going washing away my fears.


Just remembering the happy days,
Now there is nothing much to amaze,
Days in which I was laughing loud,
Now they seem like a passing cloud,

No phone calls from him to talk or smile,
Its my worst fate to walk alone all the mile,

Wish the coming days wont be like this,

For I truly hope my future will be a bliss.....

Reviews

[Manda]

this was so sad but yet so good! you did an awesome job writing this! i enjoyed it. it wasnt too short or too long. just right! well done!

[Wicahpi]

Sad :(

[deeps]

This is quite the write here
very emotional and well written.
Love the flow and rhyme.

[untoldtruth]

although i can understand what you are trying to convey, I am slightly confused. but good job, and keep writing :)