CreEpy!

                                 

                  Creepy


The Grey folded sky that touched the land,
Isolated place so scary, beyond words can explain,
At a stone’s throw distance, I found huge tree,
So barren, with no leaves, fruits or flowers…

I walked, slowly towards the tree,
How strange!!!!
There was a gargantuan trunk,
Tied to the top of it….

My meddling mind, wanted to know what it is,
I walked near by,
Failing to notice the black guard dog,
It barked so loud, as if it was signaling someone….

Something flew fast above my head,
I looked up, and saw ravens hovering in the air,
My feet turned cold, but I didn’t show it out,
I ran to the other side of tree, still the dog followed me!

All of a sudden, there was light shining bright,
The darkness was gone,
Boohoo, my mind raced,  “what was it?”
There were sparkles of light, from the eye hole of the skulls…

Then I heard mysterious sounds
I turned around, but found no one!
The chains that were trussed around the tree
Began to release, by its own….

The ravens flapped in circles,
Watchdog cried, like the return of its king
Skulls shined brighter and brighter
Thud! Thud! Thud! The trunk opened!

Miasma of white fumes filled the place,
A shrill cry, chanting of bewitching spells,
From within the trunk raised the eidolon!
It burned my eyes, and pulled me inside the tree...

Plash !!! Plash !!!!! The liquids splashed on my face
I screamed! Hollered for help,
Then I heard a voice “ HOW LONG WILL YOU BE SLEEPING???”
Oof! Good heavens! It was one of my worst dreams!



Mysterious ~ Excellent!

Mar 18, 2010

• Mysterious
• CreEpy!

Oh! So Dark

Apr 15, 2010

• On The Dark Side
• CreEpy!

 Death Ghost Award 

Apr 16, 2010

• Shadows And Ghosts From The Grave
• CreEpy

Inklike Award

Jul 2, 2010

• BLACK
• CreEpy!

Reviews

[Ian]

Cool it started out very dark, a very suspensful like poem. It was riveting kept me guessing whats going to happen and when it reached conclusion boom you woke. Great job

[An owl on the moon]

Powerful, vivid write... it comes alive like a magical myth, line by line lingering in emotion and depth. Wonderful write!

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow .. very creepy dream.. full of darkness and mystery. I think if I had one this dark I'd be speaking to someone to see what the dreams represented! Very vivid.. I'd say thank goodness you woke up! Great job!

[Wicahpi]

LoL But... I wasn't finished with this story, yet!
I wanted more...awakened too soon! hehehe
You weaved this tale well drawing the reader right in to it.
I wanted to know what was inside the tree!

Nicely done. Thank you for entering this into my
"Mysterious" contest!!

[Bette]

I like this! well done!

[Dev]

This reminds me of the Harry Potter Tree.. haha.. Good Imagery !!

[Simple_mee]

Creepy! Actually creey! I could feel thethings happening...
Thank goodness really that it was a dream... ;-p
Great write, fabulous imagery... ;)
Well done!