Kids In Summer

                     "Kids In Summer ☀☂"


During hot summer days,
When sun blaze bright,
Child plays flying kite.

                  Playing in scorching sun,
                  Holiday time fun starts,
                 They run chasing carts.

                                     No classes to attend,
                                    Summer tents extend high,
                                    Exams end, fears fly.

                  They love catching fish,
                  Their prayers wish small
                  Tiny fish for all!

Returning home at sunset,
Waiting to let in,
With wet dirty skin.












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AWARDS/ BADGES WON:

Winner

May 20, 2010

• Any Poem
• Kids In Summer

 

 

Bronze Summer!!!!

Feb 19, 2011

• Summer!!
• Kids In Summer


 

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This was very well written, it reminded me of my own childhood :)

[Wicahpi]

Fun Write!

[JENY]

Kids will like it...
Really...

[Simple_mee]

Loved this ... Made me remember my own childhood when 'playing day in & day out' was my only religion. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

To be young and time to celebrate being alive. I believe our children need to celebrate life before we must work till we die. A excellent poem. Description and story was outstanding.
Coyote

[deeps]

This is so wonderful I really enjoyed this write.
Very well written. I like this.

[Samantha Young]

Awesome poem. Exactly what most children feel when summer starts! HAPPY SUMMER EVERYONE!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Well Written. I can almost hear the childrens' voices.

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Well, you certainly got the summer scene down pat!

[The Water Queen]

Very fun poem. I enjoyed this and the graphics are adorable