Unexpected Pain

Some reflection,Some emotion,

And some unexpected sorrow

That's attack in soft heart.

It's overcast with darkness!!!

Reviews

[Sukylola]

very succint!nice!:)

[quinfinn]

very deep and filled with raw emotion, splendid example of how so much can be said with so little effort, given the right vessel. superb write....well done

[Shamsuddin Mazed]

okay.thanks.

[Abdur Raqeeb]

A short and sweet poem filled with emotions. Really enjoyed reading it!

[Shamsuddin Mazed]

thanks.

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful short poem. You said a lot in so few words. When darkness overtake the heart. Hard to know happiness. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Shamsuddin Mazed]

Thank's to everyone........

[Sami Khalil]

Nice poem. Salam .

[Shamsuddin Mazed]

okay..

[RachelReaper]

Remnds me of this kid in my class. We were supposed to write poems about our names, so he wrote a shortened haiku that said,
The name Ryan
Sure is hard to write
A haiku about
LOL

[Shamsuddin Mazed]

hi,funny man....

[gombeggar]

almost a haiku...good thoughts...visually it needs an edit then it'll stare off the screen at folks

[quinfinn]

every now and then i read someone's poetry and it feels as if it were directed at me personally. i felt this write deeply. very solid and profoundly poignant

[de_maruf]

good
baki tuku koi?

[Shamsuddin Mazed]

You like pain.So, your needed many???