Warrior's Rush

Kinda like a desire..

You cant stop me now

I'm in the flow..

blood boiling

adrenaline rushing

I wouldnt feel any pain if you shot me

This is the warrior's rush

don't you see?

Nothing in this world could stop me,

not a single thing.

I want to do more,

cause pain,

win the fight.

That is the goal of the rush,

destroy the opponet,

and make it painful

and long lasting.

Break a few things while your at it,

make em bleed..

Its all a sport

not take me wrong,

I'm a friendly person.

But when i step into the cage..

its a whole different story

Author's Note

What do ya think?

Reviews

[Your Tasty Field Adviso..]

it has good flow. it seems that you just through the poem together really quickly. some of the ways you put things made it seemed to jump around somehow, but it somehow flows with a beautiful meloncholy lovelyness. great poem

[-!katie!-]

really good babe :]
keep writinggg
because people who write are cool people :]]
hahaha.