It's autumn...

It is my first haiku...

It's an autumn breeze,

So lonely, pushing golden leaves,

But then, spreading peace.

Author's Note

As I told this is my first haiku so if any mistake then please tell and please tell how is it.

Reviews

[APOORVA]

wow
simple and beautiful indeed

[Shasha]

Thank you so much Apoorva...

[Vasilees Sybissyl]

Third good haiku for me. Good work!

[Shasha]

Thank you very much Vasilees...

[Dust That Drifts Throug..]

This is a good first Haiku. I like the emotions of it.

[Shasha]

Thank you very much willowwaldgrave...

[Hi]

This is just fine I think for a first Haiku. It's expressing a couple different emotions with decent contrast and metaphor. Thanks for sharing.

[Shasha]

Thank you Matt