Don't Forget... To Exhale

A Poem by sharonlee

Words and Art Sharonlee

Remembering those moments-

- sighs within whispers
half smiles under half closed eyes
so-soft fingertips
brushing
stray curls of hair from fire flushed cheeks...
... no need to speak
after years of loving, those eyes
spoke volumes...
just
.... don't
forget
to
Exhale.
*
Sharonlee Goodhand Imageweaver 2021

© 2021 sharonlee

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barleygirl

I love the mystical weaving of your writing & artwork together. I love how you leave it unsaid that such are moments of bliss, that we unknowingly hold our breath. I prefer a poem like this that paints imagery & lets the message unfold as it may for each individual reader (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago

4 Years Ago

Thank you Margie :) life needs a little mystery and moments of obscurity!
Greatly apprecia.. read more

Einstein Noodle

ahahahaha! I love it Sharon!! especially the inclusion of longevity in loving .. killer use of the exhale in closing .. don't forget you say :))))))))))) wonderful humor and sensuality and grace .. great job young lady!
E.

Posted 4 Years Ago

4 Years Ago

Many thanks Einstein... it was nice to feel the flutter of inspiration again!

Coyote Poetry

You create a masterpiece dear Sharonlee. The words flowed gentle and the words were meaningful and worthwhile. I loved the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry for love.
Coyote