When i'm with you

Wen i'm with you

All the pain goes away

I can be myself

and I never want to leave

When i'm with you

Everything makes sense

I don't have to worry

and so many great memories are made

When i'm with you

I feel protected

I feel like i'm here for a reason

and I feel complete

When i'm with you

I'm in love

Reviews

[quinfinn]

beautifully expressed and cleverly created. very nice and heartfelt poem!

[Cynthia]

Sweet. I love how you give examples before really say you're in love.When we're in love, it seems with him/her, everything will be perfectly fine, and everything will just be sane :) I love this poem, I love how it end, mainly, its great!
Just one question, why didn't you capital the 'i' in the title and first line?
Nice Written!