Myself

A poem.

It is with the ocean's growing tide
and the planet's graceful dance

that I see myself.

It is on the gentle hand of the wind
and the willow's softly swaying branches

that I hear myself.

It is with the bird's daring flight

and the widow's hollow cry

that I feel myself.

It is on the desert's sun scorched sand
and the moon's failing light

that I find myself.

Author's Note

Hey you guys, hope you like it. Um... for the 'that I feel myself', well, I don't really like that one. If you have any suggestion as to what word I could change 'feel' to please tell me, I'd really appreciate it. I tried 'know' but it just didn't really work for me. Anywho, thanks so much, please leave a review!!!

Reviews

[Distant horizons]

This is superb. can feel the leap you are making within yourself/your writing in this piece. Very introspective, in a positive and self assured way i mean.

[SheActsLikeSummer]

Thank you, I really appreciate it.