Evanescence

winter frost

captured all windows

my view to life lost

frozen

imprison

dreaming a new season

Terry D'Arcy-Ryan

Reviews

[Phill Oz O'fee]

This may be an older write but still relevant for the winter days we have now - snowed in can be depressing! Until the thaw brings an escape... nice one... :-)

[Christian]

I really like this a lot. It really captures the feeling of being stuck inside during frozen days or nights.

[Michael S]

Captivating title, beautiful image and brilliant writing.
Thanks for sharing this poem.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A very dramatically presented piece full of pathos about losing the memory of summer. Great word choice presenting appropriate feelings and images.

[wordman]

a lot said in a few words,the image says it all
a beautiful wonderland