I loved the movement of thoughts. I enjoyed the story told. We become memories and beautiful places in old age. Thank you my friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
These are some sweet rhyme schemes your dropping my friend, I had a smile on my face all through the reading of this. There was a shifting in imagery as well for me, the first part was like a game of baseball, the second was like a wide open field on a windy day. All in all a fantastic poem, wonderfully structured and presented. Absolutely loved it.
Posted 4 Years Ago
4 Years Ago
just a ghost of reminisce traveling through my mind. You are very keen to see the memories of my si.. read morejust a ghost of reminisce traveling through my mind. You are very keen to see the memories of my siblings and my youth. Thank you
outstanding. words, imagery, structure, pics all top-notch. I can take away so much meaning. everything and everyone is a unique creation. a struggle to remain true. free-spirited. sheer poetry in motion. sad and uniquely beautiful at the same time. great piece, yet another favorite ... :)
When I was a young girl I was your average Tomboy. I lived to watch Star Trek the only thing that could take me away from the voyages of the Star Ship Enterprise was playing Baseball with the boys. .. more..