Flammable heart

Our fireplace was damp and cold,

3 years of separation would be it.

Oh the number of firemen to put out just one dangerous fire!

I could say I was treated for 4th degree burns.

Yesterday we met after long and you still spoke with your notorious smile,

And I knew I'd burnt down as a whole then and there.

Author's Note

My first poem in free verse. Please give me feedback. Thank you!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Burning down the house. Next time leave the fireplace alone. I enjoyed this tale, led to logical ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[annalysiar]

Great honest and raw. Awesome write

[rhymeaway]

Thank you!!

[Mara]

its great! really like it :)
thank you for sharing!

[rhymeaway]

Thank you for reading!

[David Scott]

I love free verse. Keep writing. It will open up more and more as you explore.
I could see smile and feel the burn.

[rhymeaway]

Thank you for reading!

[Southern_Writes]

Its beautiful and so free, that it really leaves a lot in the creative and story area. I liked it. It tells a stroy of a reignited love that once had blazed.

[rhymeaway]

Thank you for reading!

[Bear]

Disarmed, drained and defeated all by a simple smile that numerous firemen could only fan the flames :~)
Don't read more into that because of the smile ha, ha, I think you did a very nice job, I give it for out of five Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[rhymeaway]

Hahah thank you so much!

[Lydia Shutter]

A notorious smile will draw you in no matter how long the separation has been. Some emotions never die. Lydi**

[rhymeaway]

I find those emotions very beautiful however disheartening they may be.
Thank you for reading!

[wordman]

a hot romance is hard to extinguish,your free write is great

[rhymeaway]

Thanks friend!