Rain

I like the sound of the word "tepid."

Tepid rain falls

and the desert comes alive

colors beneath

arise thirsty

blooming upon the sand

The desert witch

with her bells

dance a spell

dance a story

dance for the creation

springing forth from the cracks

as the tepid rain falls

and the desert comes alive

Author's Note

Critiques are welcomed and appreciated!

Reviews

[Priscilla Sayers]

I love how you conveyed the desert coming to life as it drank in the rain, soaking in every drop, all the desert animal popped into the scene you painted for me and they were enjoying the rain, soaking in the refreshment, grateful for the tepid rain.
Beautiful.

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simply amazing, i enjoyed this

[~Lizzy♬]

This poem is so beautifully written. Well done! :)

~Lizzy~

[paradise]

Ohh i really like this its so good :D

[Kayla :)]

:) Loved this piece. It was really well writen :)

[WritersSoul]

I agree, 'tepid' is a great word :) I believe in these kinds of poems, beauitful and paint a picture in my head as i read line after line :P
Beth :3

[((Teenage_Poet_Loser))]

i loved it =-]

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Excellent vivid poem, much enjoyed :)

[Aly Jones]

I love the description you have in this.