Dusk

A Poem by BlueEyes

The day ends once more
with a silent sigh it waits
to rise once again

© 2011 BlueEyes

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Stella

Great poem! It's amazing how it's so short yet it has so much meaning !

Posted 14 Years Ago

An owl on the moon

You capture that sense of night's pause... that moment when light slips away, but hope rises in the new dawn. Profound glimpse.

Posted 14 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Added on October 13, 2011
Last Updated on October 13, 2011

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BlueEyes

Santa Barbara, CA

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I've been telling stories since I was a little girl (mostly to myself and my imaginary friends), and I guess around the end of elementary school, I finally began writing some of these stories. So that.. more..