deserve a sacrifice

I came to indulge a sample...

feeding off of your essence
feeling sense of your presence
excited for appealing new
walking across diversities and everythang...
thinkin I'm doin one for you

put caution in far decades

stay where it didn't have chance

to unravel...bother with nerves

I came to brag on your cadence

accomplishments...your verses

travel all this way and what I received

was your center with the inner in trimmings

and a decorated persona...a large dose of E...gone baby

then I realized a sacrifice delivered in vain

for an attitude easily 100 proof

instantaneously woahed

pulled back on strings as you

don't have to convince me of the truth

because it has registered

too much been done for you

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Whoa...you gone done it now dahlin'. Love a good rant within a poetic embrace! Can't pick a favorite line, I love it all...adore how you can twist an emotion and make it sound so classy ;)

[Shirlena]

I know it's been a year. Thanks Frieda :)