named abhorrence

character study

adapting many forms…renown as versatile

beautiful face or strong constitution

mastery over anatomical excellence

wizard of aptitude… high browism

summoning seventh wonders at mere hint

and yet a small difference in other forces

tips glass of security

shrinking shaking egoisms reflection

so addictively dependent on

 

every living being few countries more unique

couple rungs … directions more blooming

city filled with multi faceted diamonds more

than one same shape

 

but attached on a well dressed apple lipped grin

in the wings ill… is pain

camouflage of disdain for that speaking dialect

of non conformity

Reviews

[Traci]

A very complex yet brilliant poem that will be interpreted many different ways. That is truly the beauty of poetry. Love your work and look forward to reading more.

[Shirlena]

Thank you VITD look forward to the same from you.

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

You are hands down, one of the most complicated pens I've ever encountered. This was like square dancing in circles under bright lights! Lol Complex, yet brilliant. Now, please entertain my thoughts... I gathered that "the intellectual" though unique and confident. Can be moved by the opinion of the greater whole of social pressures, but ultimately, finds peace in one's individuality. If I'm way off, please do correct me. Looking forward to your interpretation.

[Shirlena]

I think you are very close to my motivation for this piece PH...plus it's so much fun to hear another interpretation of what I write. I don't fight it...I encourage it. I think what a poem says to one speaks something else to another. That's cool with me:) Thank you so much for reading and your elaboration :)

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Very true... We do all walk away with our own meanings, its the beauty of perspective. I really would enjoy your breakdown, it would be a wonderful view of how the gears in your head work. You write with a complexity all your own, it's quite inspiring.

[Shirlena]

You didn't notice me trying to wiggle my way out of giving away my inspiration for this piece huh LOL...ok then and thank you.

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

I did. Lol but I'm known to be persistent... had to try. ;)

[Sami Khalil]

You have described the non-conformist marvelously. A mere hint of whats to come...Bravo....................

[Shirlena]

I was hoping to get the point across Sami - smile. Thank you

[Sami Khalil]

Good. You are welcome...:)....................