minus one...heart grows a tree

the one, the only

the momentary prophetess as I turn away…

hips pendulum waves a blues

never been played

with you pulsating spectator

 

wide as any stretch of motherlands

 ambrosial dust teases palate

 scrambling grasp on reality

uncertain of exiting or creating an entrance

senses depart physicality

agitating sudden ignorance

surrounding smoke of denial

battling gravitational pull with fever

emotions trump all resoundingly…

intricate conversation persist

within psyche

scribing without an instrument

drawing utterances that fall

scatter pleasantly about the stance as seedlings

taking to root and stem mingling innermost parts

a message inserts to compliment your crest interpreting...

it is

 I

first

 decorating you

Reviews

[Wuji]

The first 2 stanzas are perfect, then it feels like you came back to the poem to continue it, I will coin a phrase that sums up your style:

"urgency in sweet ambiguity", anyway this one is VERY good. It's a synthesis of feeling and experience. I want you to enter this one to the festival.

[Frieda P]

I read this as the movement and responses to poetry. Of course I'm not feeling my best, so I could be reading from a feverish point of view, either way, you always set my mind adrift to ponder, always a good thing.

[Shirlena]

I like your interpretation too...for me poetry says something different in most cases, to everyone who reads it. Rarely are two the same and I welcome that. I hope you feel better though Frieda and thanks for taking the time out to read something of mine:).

[Shaquana Adams]

scrambling grasp on reality
uncertain of exiting or creating an entrance...

a message inserts to compliment your crest interpreting...
it is
I

first
decorating you

The title helped me understand this one more than any other part. I really like your word usage here, it's very vivid and exciting. Good job! :)

[Shirlena]

Thank you Shaquana...sometimes I have read a poems several times which I love to do, in order to get an entire vision. Glad you were able to build an interpretations: ). All interpretations are beautiful to me.