send some kisses

inspiration from another poem read

not many indulge where I reside

no precious advances to tingle by

the one's sending baby butterfly's

dallying fancy curly q's cross the kidneys

must be downward pass over that bridge

where the foliage slow dance 

looking spontaneous even tempting

eyes feast from the asphalt mound I occupy

no sense for optimism

pointless attempts at melancholy

at times don't appear as far gone

not regarding this particular view

none of it mine…guess to touch precious abnormality

have to knock down door of dreams

stow off on a rocket to “if ever” holding head

high enough to coast as the people grands spoke about before retreating temporary rest

petitioning in confidentiality someone takes flight

to a lil’ coconut petit’ four which is me

from the south …bring some mysterious blessing

with benevolent intentions walking on two’s

carrying a ruby bow on top a box full of clamoring kisses

needing to catch a current 

 

travel to a waiting pair

 

having none

Reviews

[Aethereal]

This is a very emotional prose. Some people just pound and pound from their asphalt mound on a door of dreams in search of a box of kisses . Click your ruby slippers twice if you wanna get back to Kansas.

[Shirlena]

Nope...I ain't nevah comin back Aethereal. Thank you sweets.

[Aethereal]

Then, you're welcome to stay in Wonderland with Cheshire the cat!

[Frieda P]

Someone's optimism destroy your thunderbolt dear? Plenty of rants to choose from on the cafe today...who had the kahunas to call you a 'lil coconut petit four'...ha, great line, but I beg to differ. Next time, don't hold back. ;)

100 ruby bows on clamoring kisses

[Shirlena]

I'm always a target of my own self of whom I never back down from :). (I called myself that LOL) Thanks lovely for the read.

[Wuji]

This is a more structured cadence and seems more pulling, less your natural spontaneous crazy voice. The poem is downright difficult, like a saucy date in a bad mood. But if you try to listen to what she is saying instead of just admiring her body, you come to find that her mind is beautiful yet.

[Shirlena]

Sorry this one was not to your liking Wuji...I guess it hard to hit the bullseye in the hearts every time but thanks for reading:).

[Jamil Isimbabi]

nice poem shirlena. I particularly love the continuous use of metaphors like this one 'have to knock down door of dreams'. ---

[Shirlena]

Thank you so much Jamil for the read.

[Sami Khalil]

"benevolent intentions walking on two’s

carrying a ruby bow on top a box full of clamoring kisses

needing to catch a current



travel to a waiting pair






having none"

I feel the narrator is feeling a drought of kisses, a spontaneous tempting for love, a precious abnormality for dremas where slow dances occur on foliage fields of fancy...Excellent...:)..............

[Shirlena]

lol Thanks Sam, I really appreciate having you to read this and find it worth while cause I know my writing comes from a place far far out there -smile. I'm honored you like my crazy.

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. You are welcome...:)...................