I owe I

the "I's" have it

yes...having yielded contrarily

ignored streets whistling first born ambition

yes must be a reckoning

biographical submission

freeze sets in...naked selfishness

 purchaser... obeisance to none other mortal

minutes approaching where

I am owing to I

April 1 NaPoMo

Reviews

[Wuji]

This is a good concept, a fragment that could be continued, no?

The naked selfishness seeks expression.

[Shirlena]

I might do an I owe I too and thanks for the selfishness and the pretty review :).

[Aethereal]

And thus we owe it to our selves to be larger than life itself: I was inspired to write this tiny gift poem for you:

Debt

I’m a treasure chest of wealth.
The more I spend, the more I owe
to that person I call self.
The more I reap, the more I sow.

[Shirlena]

Honey, I love the presents...gift me baby :). Do be encouraged to turn this one into a poem as well. Thanks love.

[Aethereal]

You're welcome!

[Sami Khalil]

"freeze sets in...naked selfishness
purchaser... obeisance to none other mortal"

I feel as if you are a psychologist dissecting the human psyche so well. The three levels. The selfishness of the I. The possession of the I to the I. The contrast between born with ambitions or self-made ambitions. Excellent...:)..............

[Shirlena]

Ooooo hooooo I like that Sam...is that was it sounded like I was doing (big grin)? Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. At least to me...You are welcome...:)..................