I Gave You My Heart

The first boy ive ever loved. and i still love him, even after the 8 months of torture of watching him fall in and out of love with me. of watching him love other girls. Am i pathetic?

I asked only one thing of you,

You couldn't even do it.

You knew my heart would split in two,

Yet you still cast me into that dark pit.

 

I asked you to keep it close to your heart,

Yet you just threw it away.

Now it's tearing apart,

And all you do is laugh at my dismay.

 

I knew it wouldn't last forever,

But I thought it would last longer than this.

All the hurt I had to endeavor,

Yet I still cherished that one lying kiss.

 

I hope you burn in your lies,

I hope it eats away at your soul like it did mine.

I hope you suffer the same demise,

I hope it sends cold, dark, chills up your spine.

 

But even as I say this now,

I know in my heart that I'm lying.

For my soul has made a vow,

Which curses me to keep crying.

 

I love you still,

Even though it pains me to say it.

For you I would kill,

And I have, my heart, I've allowed you to take it.

 

And you broke it, several times, without a second glance back...

Author's Note

The first boy ive ever loved. and i still love him, even after the 8 months of torture of watching him fall in and out of love with me. of watching him love other girls. Am i pathetic?

Reviews

[Liz-z]

It's so cute! I loved it. Sadly the one's we love hurt us, and we put up with it because we love them so.
We also hope for the best knowing it isn't any use. What a perfect poem, loved it really, loved it! :D
Favorite lines:
"Yet you just threw it away
Now it's tearing apart "
So beautiful, why is it that guys will do that to you! Ugh.
"I love you still
Even though it pains me to say it"
So cute, and so stupid that we just can't ever resist.
Fantastic poem though, truly is! :D