LIFE IS A RACE

Poetry mirrored in the philosophy of life

Life Is a Race

 

Mary had a little lamb

Whose love was pure as snow.

And everywhere that Mary went

The lamb was sure to go.

 

He followed and followed unfailingly

Relishing even her presence.

Until he started wondering whether

His absence make any difference.

 

Read the FULL poem on my blog:

http://shivammurarispoetry.blogspot.in/2017/07/life-is-race_28.html

Please pay a visit. See you there!

Author's Note

See you on the blog. :)

Reviews

[Ruth]

This is awesome...the things so often taken for granted, that's what this poem reminds me of/about...really enjoyed this piece :)

[Leslie Philibert]

A clever write, good idea from a poet one should follow !

[B-poet]

Nice work. The last stanza is my favorite. On the last line "make" should be "made". This poem also refers to a favored and memorable nursery rhyme. An engaging read. :)

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