SCINTILLATE

 

Withered leaves, today with spring colors
Drooped flower, today with blooming respect
Like a new born
Unfurling elan in life;
A life after sunset
Is again witnessing sunrise ...

 

Horrors captivated
Aspirations lost
Zeal minuscule to survive
Still crawling soul
Is today walking, I believe
Will soon be flying...

Inner vision will vanquish
All weakness lingering on the side
Spark of success will subdue
Con catenated failures on the line
Things will soon transfigure
A little more strife...

 

Discover all what fascinate you
Do all what strike you
Keep the aspirations alive
And fly with all versatility in life,
Life is beautiful
Just a cold deep breathe inside...

Reviews

[shruthi]

they are very motivating and the hidden meanings is a true treat and great metaphors
Good work

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words and thoughts. I liked how you led to the very good ending.
"Discover all what fascinate you
Do all what strike you
Keep the aspirations alive
And fly with all versatility in life,
Life is beautiful
Just a cold deep breathe inside..."
The above line strong and hopeful. Thank you Anne for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[anne]

thank you CP :))

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Anne.

[Kurayami]

Nice contrasting piece of writing. The first and last stanza that is filled with hope contrasts with the two stanzas in the middle creates a sense of equilibrium. Well done. I'm sure not many could have been able to pull that off.

~Kurayami

[anne]

thanks my dear...:))

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

A very positive note in the last stanza: Life is beautiful. That's so true. :) Rudi

[anne]

thank you Rudi...will you help me with another italian sonnet?...i will soon write...:))

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

No problem, Anne, just give me a message when it's ready or what you expect from me, always happy to do a collaboration with you. :) Rudi

[Avinash]

You are very good at abstract poems with deep meanings.

[anne]

thanks Avinash :)