Janitor

Seemingly furthering hours
Oddly come nowhere but closer
Other days before closing- time scrubs and scours
Unchangingly everchanging, immutably so
Time, ever presenting humble power
Erasing itself-- every one and thing it's sown

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

there has to be a janitor in scrubs cleaning up life. WE do make a mess of it at times, and I wonder if we should give that janitor a raise.
j.

[Shownashappening]

I feel as if mess would be lifes middle name but WE are definitely the best at it.

Thanks for taking the time to read and review, it's much appreciated.

[FlatDaddy]

Now, this is very interesting, and I quite like it. As I see it, nothing much matters, all is gone almost before it happens. I particularly like the ending.

Nicely, and deeply, done.

FD

[Shownashappening]

I like to fluctuate between things mattering and then things not, if I'm lucky enough it'll fan the flames of arguments between me now and of my past self, this is where the observed declarations of a mostly indifferent world aid to extinguish said flames haha.

Thanks for your kind words, and taking the time to read, it matters to me :)