THE BIPOLAR ME

The side only you know, but don't understand..

              Best friends with enthusiasm and ecstasy, 
              but also discreetly allied with their nemesis. 
                         Unpredictable to the core, 
                    maybe that's what intrigued many. 

                         Known as the positive being, 
                       inspiring many to be carefree. 
                Little did they know I cry myself to sleep, 
                             for no reason coherent. 

                      If seen forlorn, it's a massive shock 
                  for they've never known the broken me. 
                    Always hyper, with a vast imagination 
                                but when in solitude, 
                   depression comes knocking at my door. 

                                 Manic and mania?
                                        Well, ya.

                    Riding this unstable roller coaster, 
                           With more ups than downs. 
             But the downs, deeper than the deep blue sea. 
            After much scrutinizing, only one theory left, 
                             this is to the bipolar me.

Author's Note

Your opinions are always welcome! I hope you liked it.

Reviews

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Thank you for your poem in my contest. I think have bipolar contidition can be more difficult . I never have deep depression or big euphoric feelings. Although my disorder can give me lot of frustration . I dealing more with good days or bad days. I think you write quiet well what is really means to be bipolar . So everybody can understand to this. I hope you doing okay and all the best to you.

[Wølfy]

I do not see how 'bipolar' is a funny word. There are plenty of funny words out there. I have know many people that were bipolar. Sadly, I just cannot understand bipolar disorder. However, I found this to be a great poem. Short and simple.

[Red Rose]

Neither do I understand.. And thanx :)

[Wølfy]

No problem. :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

That's how it goes.. I think we have multiple sides to us but there is nothing wrong with that.. Smiling on the front while broken deep down is something which many can relate to.. Beautifully captured!
I read the other review and it irritated me a lot!! If people have nothing to point out writing-wise, why do they even review? I expect just to attract attention...
Anyways, I liked reading this! Good job!☺

[Red Rose]

Thank you very much! You always say the right thing..

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome! And do I? 😂😂😂
That's sweet of you 😊

[Sikandar Khan]

heheheheheheheh bipolar ahahahahahahaha