HER UNIVERSE

The sun turned cold,
And the moon burnt over.
The stars faded,
And black holes surged forward.
She reached up high,
And touched the black water.
It trickled down to her heart,
Her universe's fragmented disaster.

Author's Note

This one just came to me and I would like to know your interpretation of this poem.
Thank you.

Reviews

[Alonzo Sherrell]

I also like this (w)rite RR. There is more than one direction your words could be heading, but I feel every possible direction originates from one core and source. 'Feeling little within one's solitary self' and it doesn't matter why or what transpired to get you there. Feelings such as this poem reminds me of, happen when our inner child-like persona curls up into a ball and simply wants to hide from life's bombardment. It's not negative or necessarily positive, and yes life's ceiling can be interrupted as 'black water' looming over one's mental and cognitive state. The human heart can be strong and it can be easily hurt and re-hurt, usually by our own hand reaching out to retest the murky depths before we have fully allowed our heart to heal. It is only a 'fragmented disaster' for as long as you choose to view your universe that way. Like I said, there is more than one direction possible here. Perhaps you were feeling little for just a day out of pure psyche exhaustion, or your working on overcoming something much deeper within your heart. (:

[Sikandar Khan]

This One Say That You Are Also A Crazy Write Who think Crazy Which HAve Crazy Imaginations Sun turned Cold Moon Burnt Over So Nice Imagination Whole 7 lines Are Nice It Looks Likes Manzar of Qaaymat Nice Work MAdam...

[barleygirl]

I like this description of possible heartbreak using the extended "universe" metaphor . . . nicely crafted to incorporate the various "space" terminology. It's pretty obvious to me, how this kind of situation feels, so your message is very relatable. It can also apply to other life disasters besides a romance fail . . . such as in my life when I was active & adventurous until a neck injury prevented me from being able to walk. This is how it felt to have my life devastated this way. Nicely stated in metaphor without going overboard.