Dances in the Rain

 

Dances in the rain
glancing off of each windowpane

Sprinting from silvered fingers forth
promising all that she is worth

 

Giving all and taking none
A true friend for those that need one

 

Silva dances with the refrains
sharing with each her secret knowledge

That to live is a luxury to never be admonished.

 

Believe, love and to give once more are the traits that she sets forth.

 

Silva dances in the rain

glancing off of each windowpane.

 

When you hear that patter on the tin roof
you know then-
that you are near heart and hearth.

 

October 4th, 2013 for Silva

Reviews

[Stephen]

Very beautiful ..an extremely meaningful poem! All images are well painted with your words. I visualized all the images on my mind at the time of reading your words. The poem has refreshes my mind, cus you know what? I love coldness of rain either along the side of storms ... lol Anyway, lovely poem! The concept's pretty nice and of course an enjoyable to read!

[A. Amos]

Simply splendid, enjoyed the read and thanks for sharing

[MAC]

a very lovely love poem. excellent write