Together

Come to me

my friend

let me hold you,

in the end

there is nothing

left to trust

but the memory

of us-

in kind embrace

and sorrow

yet on the 'morrow

upon the lifting

of your sweet lids

be thankful

for all we did

as it was-

together.

 

 

Reviews

[Arthur Henn]

One Word...."Nice!"

[April Child]

be thankful
for all we did
as it was-
together

yes this is so true, everything takes on new meaning when its done together, even emptying the dishwasher :)
Lovely.

[deadlife]

beautiful...leaving me numb...feels like the sky........accepting with arms wide open...
a very cute read...

blessings to you...
-rupam

[Eagle Cruagh]

This is in the economy of words which I love.
This is at once, a love story and an ode to
friendship. Somehow the lines become blurred
in my mind, but in this poem you pay great respect
for the friend, the one you miss.
A very nice poem and well done.
----- Eagle Cruagh

[forfila]

Yes, yes together, always was and is together. Always thankful and appreciative, especially for writting like this

Nice job =)

Love,
Me

[BlakeL79]

I am still impressed by your ability to flow words together. Such pace and elegance is difficult to master. Excellent work.

[SweetPeachesAlways]

This is exactly what I want to say to somebody at this very moment in my life! Wow. Thank you, because I intend to share this with them...It is absolutely perfect!

Beautiful flow showing such devotion and true kindness to another...ahhhh, beautiful, man, just beautiful!