Sidartha, this descriptive poem's very well written, rendering the meaning of colors, their effects on the earth as well as heart, the analogy used to describe each hue reflects what life mirrors the spectrum, as you begin with the color grean, giving
the reader the sense of invigaration, how its attributes relate to nature, that of fresh air, red- the shade of passion, sensuous in its tint, seductive, enticing by design, followed by showing the balance between black and white, and the majestic
quality of purple, with metaphorical insight, your words paint vivid imagery with
the added aspect of knowledge, that leaves the reader contemplating the entirety.
I really enjoyed reading the depth and spontaneity, scribed with ease of flow.
Take Care, Mike
Favorite Stanza:
Orange, my second favorite one
the color of the sunrise and sunset
often a moonrise of tangerine you'll get
if you watch carefully the sky
on full moon nights outside
or from your door
but rather venture forth into this world
experience the wonder galore
in all the hues set forth
for those of us that open our eyes
to the beauty of the majestic
Sublime.
This piece is so warm and pleasant. It takes me on a trip around the world, but the beauty lies in the fact that you state every color, then point out the beautiful things in nature which bear this color, and you zoom in on those beautiful things, you magnify them study them, linger stanza by staza focused on one tiny detail, before teleporting the reader to yet another piece of beauty. Brilliant.
My favorite color is blue, and so the respective stanza was probably my favorite,
"Blue, the tone of the sky and sea
a true sign of happiness
a healing tone."
You truly convey the peace which comes with this color.
As for this stanza:
"Yellow, thought to be sometimes
the color of disease
or is it the brilliance of the sun
dancing in coniptions upon the lawn."
I love the way you twisted the misconception, redeeming the color yellow from any prejudice, showing us the beauty in its essence.
Sidartha, this descriptive poem's very well written, rendering the meaning of colors, their effects on the earth as well as heart, the analogy used to describe each hue reflects what life mirrors the spectrum, as you begin with the color grean, giving
the reader the sense of invigaration, how its attributes relate to nature, that of fresh air, red- the shade of passion, sensuous in its tint, seductive, enticing by design, followed by showing the balance between black and white, and the majestic
quality of purple, with metaphorical insight, your words paint vivid imagery with
the added aspect of knowledge, that leaves the reader contemplating the entirety.
I really enjoyed reading the depth and spontaneity, scribed with ease of flow.
Take Care, Mike
Favorite Stanza:
Orange, my second favorite one
the color of the sunrise and sunset
often a moonrise of tangerine you'll get
if you watch carefully the sky
on full moon nights outside
or from your door
but rather venture forth into this world
experience the wonder galore
in all the hues set forth
for those of us that open our eyes
to the beauty of the majestic
Sublime.