Those Eyes

Those eyes I've sought

all my life

seem brown to me

a doe-eyed man I seek

I can not say why

I don't eat chocolate

but would taste the

nuance of your

ebony tinged gaze

every moment

that I breath

as I know somehow

my true love

lives behind those brown eyes

and seeks my emerald return.

 

 

Reviews

[Angela]

This is great!!

[Arthur Henn]

Smiling upon this one.

I'm going to see what color my eyes are.

Great Poem.

[Christopher 'Windstorm'..]

wow... beautiful! i really enjoy reading your muses because it gives me chills, i think we might be on the same wave length... lol

[Unnameworthy]

You should change breath to breathe (unless it was intentional) but on the whole, quite pretty.

-Evan