School Girl Undertakings

Plaid skirts

short skirts

knee highs

the girls so kindly wear

bringing joy to heart

and mind

thinking only of the joy

the boys might find

within their thighs tonight

such are the thoughts

of the high school lad

as he swiftly watches

the young girls clad

in their

schoolgirl undertakings.

 

 

Reviews

[Y.F.]

That's so true - catholic school girls have become some what of a sex symbol, especially in the US.
I think it's their so called purity, and how some of them want to break all the barriers put before them and do everything the church teaches them is taboo.
They are some sort of a taboo themselves.
Great write, with great flow to it - very child like, which is very fitting.

[robin]

The more experienced the "schoolgirl" the better. But who do they bring joy to heart and mind? That's no lad on testosterone. Women are so cunning. This is a good teaser. I wonder where he watches them from? Interesting in the context here.

[N3v3r_2_L@t3]

This poem is a short one, but I like it. It kind of makes me laugh at the end. Its like one of those poems you write when you're bored out of your mind, and want to think of something no one else has thought of, and write a poem on it. You did a great job with it though. And this poem, is so true. There are a lot of preverted guys out there, who do want to get into the school girl's "undertakings". You hit that right on the money=] Keep up the good work