Fantasy

Within my mind's eye

you do exist

present with

the perfect kiss

loving Divinely, True

I need you so

my sweet-

bless me with

your presence

escape the shadows

of consciousness-

awake me now

be there

lying by my side

then take me

completely

in the rising tide

of pleasure

that reigns

between two lovers

united as One

beneath the morning sun

where the light of the day

will allow us to see

the fruition

of

fantasy.

 

 

Reviews

[robin]

In our dreams
I call you to me
feet get pounced on
in early morn
my heart now stronger
than minutes before
my eyes still filled with sand
and where does Ra me send me?
into the arms of energy
that I might love eternally
while she throws me
in the air with zeal
I spin and spin her
dreams to feel
and ever on our feet we land.

More deliciosity pleez,
Robin

[forfila]

I love this,, "the fruition of fantasy" What a great line to cap off a great poem. I love it =
)

Love
Me

[wizthom]

love the dreamy feel of this write the soul searching ,
as if u are writing to me,,peace wizthom

[Arthur Henn]

I'm tempted to write something here...lol

Running for a COLD SHOWER!

Art

[Forest Green]

Excellent...'in the rising tide of pleasure...'

Sweet words, thrilling thoughts, move the soul forward in a gently sensual manner.

Lovely...

Daniel

[ANNA]

I felt like I was reading a fantasy stoire and I was part if it! I love it.. sending my some much of your writing..I would be more then happy to read them!

Anna

[Iretex2012]

wow this sounds like one of my dreams. I enjoyed reading this poem. Great job.