Given Answer

Question asked, yet again,

Answer given,

Clear and true,

Heart broken,

Tears break through,

 

Said it could never be love,

Said it could never be true,

Heart pounds,

Eyes water,

 

Apologies said,

Given answer true,

Like a poisoned arrow it stings,

Like a thorn it pierces,

 

Given answer aching,

Reply made agonizing,

Heart calling loud and clear,

Yet plea not heard,

 

Irresistible,

Impossible to possess,

Heart longs,

Body aches.~

 

Reviews

[Dalebear]

This is a sweet poem

Dalebear

[Fanciful Goddess]

pretty poem,love the words very sweet...sweet poem!

[Dillon Cotter]

kinda the thought of a bad thing between a couple, but i enjoyed this one. =]

-Will

[Glo]

Love it. Short but to the point, raw, and honest.

[C.A.B.S.]

this reminds me of a bad relationship. I do like how it stays with the meaning of the poem. It reminds me of Destiny Child song.

[razholandr]

Again, it flows really well; like a song :)

[E. A. Fielder]

I like it! was this a personal poem?

[Monica]

This is really good :] I like it a lot.