It's Time

It’s time to forget you;

For my heart not to beat

In the rhythm of your name.

 

It’s time for my heart

To beat on its own

And not in sync with yours. 

Reviews

[Sorry Infamous]

I enjoyed this. I think almost that the first stanza could stand alone and be perfect. It is where the strength in this poem lies and the second stanza sounds much the same but weaker and with less conviction... unless of course you did that on purpose, perhaps your resolve was meant to lessen at the end. Either way, good write.

[Dalebear]

Very beautiful poem, simple and straight to the point.

Dalebear

[Hannah]

I like it, simple and to the point

[Fanciful Goddess]

very beatiful and cute!

[Jeff Miller]

This poem is extremely short. I liked what was there and it spoke to me. I felt clear emotion and could definitely relate to it. I do think that it can have a bigger and better impact if the poem was expanded, even if just 4 lines. I think it needs to tell more of a story, give you more of an explanation, or just make you empathize more. Good write, nonetheless. Keep writing!