Galaxy

The brilliantly bright stars shine in the night,

In the galaxy where there are too many planets and stars to count;

Too many for a person to count in their lifetime.

Author's Note

Written for a competition… The theme "galaxy" came from http://oneword.com and I was supposed to write a poem in 60 seconds.

Reviews

[AleyshaRosa]

For a 60 second poem, that was enchanting. A simple three verses was really all this poem needed to portray the magnificence of space. Well done, thanks for sharing.
Koodoos

[frivolous treasures]

Brilliantly written in just a minute... I wish my brain could think that fast! lol
But this was well thought and written... great job :)

[Tate Morgan]

I often think of this and wonder myself if A THOUGHT CAN BE LARGER THAN A UNIVERSE?

[The Pain Stays Fresh]

This is really good. I love it's short simplicity. It's very refreshing.

[Melina]

Pretty good for 60 seconds! I like the last line! Good write! :)

[MOON]

Simple and smart!

[Archia]

Brilliance in 60 seconds. I'm quite impressed that this could come in 60 seconds, it's really quite beautiful and thoughtful as well.

[Stella]

For 60 seconds this is amazing! I prefer reading shorter poems as opposed to longer ones because I think you can get the point across easier.

[Reaper]

very simplily put but very powerful

[Walk away slow poet]

This is so sweet and wonderful, very well written.