Violet Field

 

As I walk down the road with you, I take the air and breathe it in, my heart that beats perfectly when you are near me.

Am I the one to lift you up to the vast field of purple violets, where our silent minds dance together in the privacy of the magical nights?

Give me the honour of looking into your eyes and entering your heart, where the way leads to your soul that had been connected with mine, since the beginning of our lives.

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

Purple - colour perfect for those that look both inwards and out. The colour regal yet embracing, touchable/ Your words here mean and offer truth in whatever hides within you. You have said what many could and cannot say.. tis beautiful in every way. Many, many mystic thanks.. joy within.

[Silmara McGarry]

Hello dear!
You are so right!
Much appreciated your visit and kind words!
Thank you so much!
Wishing you a marvelous weekend 🌸

[emmajoygreen]

You are oh so welcome, Silmara. Many thanks and good wishes. :)

[Lorry]

Beautiful words, thoughts and sentiment, cascading off the page, into our minds. Superb.

[Silmara McGarry]

I really like the way you set your words in your reviews, very thoughtful :-) Thank you indeed.

[Lorry]

You're welcome :)

[Inject Positivity]

Very adorable, I love your poems simplicity, they are always written in a simple way but makes the reader feel the feelings of love roaming in the words of the poem... The last line, so amazing and innocent... Loved it frnd...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Silmara McGarry]

Yes, I really like simple not to long poems, but the feelings will always be there pouring...lol...Thank you soooo much for your kind words. Regards. Sil

[Lord of mad men]

very nice. i loved it. it is great. i like how you changed everything to violet. some writers just leave everything the same i do that bc i just do. but it is nice.

[Silmara McGarry]

Many thanks indeed! That is what I said: why not everything violet...it is after all violet field..lol...I really appreciated :-)

[Jackie]

Lovely read. And beautiful write. Really enjoyed it. Keep it up..:-)

[Silmara McGarry]

Thanks a million Jackie :-) I am happy you enjoy it! I will...I will ;-)