Surreal Love

Between the gracefulness of butterflies, 
and the enchanting sweet colours of 
a warm spring morning, delivered in the 
most surreal dance, lays my Love for you.

Between the storms in the sky and the blue 
lights that surround the angels in heaven, 
mesmerized by the look in your eyes, 
hypnotized by my Love for you.

Between each wave in the ocean, gripped by 
the motion of fresh winds and one thousand 
innocent pearls, in the hands of the singing 
mermaid, breathing calmly, sails my Love for you.

Between the fascinating birds in the forbidden
forest, sweeping around ancient trees, 
sheltering the intense heat that flows quietly 
across its glittering waters, hides my Love for you. 

Between the moon and earth, and stages of 
glowing stars, twinkling up the dark night 
with promises of light, and the great creations 
of God, reflects my Love for you.

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

'Between the fascinating birds in the forbidden
forest, sweeping around ancient trees,
sheltering the intense heat that flows quietly
across its glittering waters, hides my Love for you.'

Each and every one of your stanzas has a different mood and meaning - but still has to include that precious word. Is ther anything better than Love, Silmara. You create and share unique poetic beauty

[Silmara McGarry]

No there isn't, Love is healing and cure!
Truly appreciated dearest Emma your kind words💐

[emmajoygreen]

You are very welcome, dear Silmara

[Buddhistboy73]

Wow!
There's a lot to unpack here....:)
So many beautiful words and great imagery...

This is my favourite stanza:

Between the storms in the sky and the blue
lights that surround the angels in heaven,
mesmerized by the look in your eyes,
hypnotized by my Love for you.

A well metered and flowing poem...:)

BB73

[Silmara McGarry]

So much appreciated your kind words!
Many thanks indeed and have a splendid weekend!
:-)

[The_Ancient_Rock]

That is an outstanding piece.
A very good description of love.
Really enjoyed reading this poem.
Thank you so much for sharing.
Really enjoyed the part of the stars.
Take good care Silmara. 😃

[Silmara McGarry]

Hello dear!
I am truly glad you enjoyed and certainly grateful for your kind words!
Many thanks indeed!
:-)

[Relic]

Worth a second comment. Beautifully done by a more beautiful woman. :)

[Silmara McGarry]

That is indeed so very kind of you!
Many thanks and wishing you a marvelous weekend dearest Poet friend:-)))

[Relic]

My wish is the same for you.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

How thoroughly romantic and captivating this poem is; elegant wording and wonderful descriptions, I enjoyed the read. F.

[Silmara McGarry]

I am so glad you did! Thank you so much much for the visit :-)

[alexAlexander]

That is a great love for you. It creates images that maybe you don't want to wake up. Just enjoy your surreal love. Because I enjoyed it immensely....

[Silmara McGarry]

Hello dear!
So kind of you to read it, thanks indeed for the sweet review also! I am certainly glad you enjoyed:-)

All best
:-)))

[alexAlexander]

Yes! Keep writing.

[NormaZ]

Beautiful poem! I love the way you use the word Between before each stanza, and my love for you at the end of each stanza. Loving and joyous is how I would describe your poem.

[Silmara McGarry]

I am truly glad you enjoyed it!
Thank you so much for reaching out and your lovely review 🌷
Blessings
:-)))

[Matthew Kult]

Masterful write, beautiful read.

With love,

Matthew

[Silmara McGarry]

Much appreciated dear for reading and your superb review! Thank you so much Matthew!
Have a splendid evening.
:-)

[Ken Simm.]

A lovely sweeping song of love. Beautiful rhythm that fits the subject so exactly.

[Silmara McGarry]

Hello dear Ken!
Many thanks indeed for your wonderful review🌹

[DIVYA]

I loved the beautiful imagery of nature and the words of love, so much. Thank you for sharing

[Silmara McGarry]

Hello dear 😊
Thank you so much for your visit and lovely review 🤍

[DIVYA]

You're most welcome! :)