I Miss You Baby.

A dying love.

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A thousand and three words I will never get to say to you, forever silent my life will now be.

You were the sun in my sky, the reality of winds that would make my hair sway in the most magical motion.

But not now. Now I cannot feel the wind... numbness has taken over. Cannot hear the birds song on sunday mornings, cannot reach out and touch your hand when I am scared, because after-all, there is no hand anymore, no breeze and no noise.

All I hear now is faded memories of us both, those were the days when you were my everything, you still are sweetheart, I suppose you will never stop meaning everything to me.

Because of you my love, I cannot think straight, I think backwards.

Only sometimes of rare occasions do I realize what i've become since you passed away. For that short period of time, when sense is knocked into me. I'm me again... the one you had always loved from the beginning.

Reviews

[leinahtan]

i was so very satisfied with the ending--at the end you reigned victorious, and nothing really was lost in you.

you were the sunshine of your own life all along--having someone in it were just to make it burn even brighter. notwithstanding the separation, you're still a sun that gives out light. :D

very good poem; the song, the images, the story it creates. :)

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Wonderful , true poetry ! ... Yossi

[Susanna F]

A beautiful expression of the healing of a broken heart, very intense imagery and perfect ending.

[Antonio Valentino]

uuuuuummhh... gosh..

i know this feeling, well

so, so, beautiful my friend.. you can just feel how much you loved this person..

blessings to (((((you))))

xx

[Jaco (Jaik Miller)]

This is completely how im feeling right now. Rough break up. Great work Miss Siena!