watercolors

watercolors

A Poem by SilentDream

 

watercolors
(Tumbling Tercets)



expanses… a dipp’d canvas
and bristles soaked in sighs
…drawing blue from the corners

and the stillness of white,
to layer the earth with silence
rich enough to get lost in

while wandering through shades
of green and the whispers of those
with color still on their fingers





© 2009 SilentDream (All rights reserved) 1/23/09

 

© 2009 SilentDream


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your endearing expression is truly a watercolor work of art, I find my self desiring the loveliness you paint
across the readers heart, the actual form and dynamics compell the cause with the right balance of
detail and effect, tumbling tercets set lyricallyto the rhythm of beauty and gentleness. metaphorically
ambitious sentiment of craftiness, o be honest,reading you feels like a dream.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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...an extraordinary reading! Beautifully composed and illustrated!


My best,
Kelly

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is no moss here... oh welll =)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The picture link is broken =(
But no matter, from what I can imagine it seems misty but sunny and unspoilt. Early morning picturesque landscape perhaps. I imagine dainty still in nightgown bare foot footprints up a path carved by mildlife (yes thats mild life rather than wildlife) rather than a person, and lots of moss, yep, nice picture.


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is lovely. I like the way you use colour in this

drawing blue from the corners

and the stillness of white,
to layer the earth with silence
rich enough to get lost in

the tone seems almost hushed in keeping with the picture you have painted.


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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SilentDream
SilentDream

Baltimore, MD



About
Zsanece Brown was born in Baltimore, Maryland, in 1976. Much of her poetry is inspired by dreams and love, longing and the comfort found in silence. Her work has often been described as bordering on t.. more..