Untitled. July 2010 #2

This is like my first untitled poem because they were written around the same time.

Vision full of black,
not being able to see the road ahead.

The words are there, but i cannot see them.

They linger waiting for me but i am too blind.

I want to say whats going on, but i do not know.

The tears are here,

continuously flowing, but still i do not know;

how to say what i feel,

how to say what hurts,

how to say Help Me Please.

I want to be happy, but it will not come.

Instead there is a mask,

glued to my face, adding to the blackness.

I do not know when I will be free,

it's not clear;

nothing is.

I just want to know,

but its too dark.

Reviews

[Bloody_Stars]

ur really good. i can really feel the pain. :)