The Edge

So very close to the edge.

The wind takes my breath

leaving me with nothing, alone.

It seems so clear, but i can’t.

Holding back,

holding on.

Leaning forward to get a taste,

but staying far enough back to keep from getting sucked in.

Pulled into the darkness

pulled into the hurt.

It calls to me

I am on my own,

nothing to keep me back.

I lean towards the edge.

Maybe I should just let it take me.

Reviews

[Bloody_Stars]

i really like this, got me scared for sec lol

[Gone]

Interesting twist at the end. The first half had me reaching the edge as I have done so many time when cliff walking. The echillerating feeling with the wind blowing in your face. Then your dark twist as the second half comes in. good write.