UNnoticed and UNpredictable

UNnoticed and UNpredictable

A Poem by Tay

Withering trees and empty valleys

vast lands of blackness waiting to consume you.

every fiber of the soul;

deep within, fears rising.

will it change, will things become clear.

dense fog all around,

clouding the paths of and ever growing mind.

thoughts whizzing around;

whispering doubts,

hopes,

anything to sway you.

will you listen

or disappear

into the emptiness.

© 2011 Tay


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Thought provoking and clearly perspective, geared intelligence, a true poet, well done

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Tay
Tay

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My poetry can be of a dark nature sometimes, and that's because I mainly write it when I'm upset or hurt. more..