In Stares Setting The Reflection

I have no idea what the hell this is about, but i think it's beautiful.

In the night they glisten. 

In the day they listen.

In the twilight they shine.

In the sunrise they're mine.

Stares, from the people i pass by.

Stares, from the only moonlight.

Stares, the shadows disrupt.

Stares, the feelings corrupt.

Setting, the stars go down.

Setting, they don't make a sound.

Setting, love's what i'm feeling

Setting, how am i dealing.

The, only burst.

The, only curse.

The, only one.

The, only sun.

Reflection, of the past.

Reflection, in the glass.

Reflection, in open space.

Reflection, of our last race.

Author's Note

Say whatever you like :-) criticism is welcome.

Reviews

[Anon]

what a lovely poem . Keep it up :)

[de-oblitus]

I rarely like repetitive and rhyming poetry but this is absolutely wonderful.