Self Portrait #1

I’m a sarcastic pile of flesh and bone, 

A steaming pile of raving madness A demon wearing human clothes;

Happy fits of lunacy With moon eyes And a candy apple smile 

Trying to unleash this animal

Unlock latent insanity 

Let my imagination Run free across the paper 

Through the eyes Of the sadistic synapses

Let them overload Misfire Molten metal images Melting

Bring you to your knees 

Let you see What is inside of me 

It's free. 

Reviews

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I really started to like this poem on the seventh line. I can definitely imagine that consuming fire of yourself. Nice descriptions overall.