From the Ashes

get up again

Let there be fire and smoke.

Let there be.

Phoenix attraction.

Smoldering kisses and breath.

Burning skin.

Ashes to ashes.

Then in silence, regrow your feathers.

Bathe in the muddy gray, 

unseen war-paint.

(Marks of a fractured saint).

Reviews

[Brett Moore]

Short and sweet. And awesome. I think a comma would communicate as well as the period, if not better. "Bathe in the muddy gray/ unseen war paint/ marks of a fractured saint"
You really communicated to me the passion or intensity inside those stanzas. I'm a fan.

[SilverFish]

Thank you for your comment and constructive review, I agree, I sometimes get "blind" to my own writing, word-blind I guess! And I am still learning and growing. :) Thanks!