Tears from the Clouds

Yesterday won't go back anymore

I follow my path

Filled with mysteries

I’m waiting for a light

Hidden Message revealed

 

Sympathy with the clouds

Every pouring rain

Calling for your embrace

 

I can’t change the time

But, those tears remind me

Every play of yesterday

 

To stand up along trials

So, don’t worry!

Hold on! Hold on!

 I’m Here. . .

Author's Note

Enjoy! Just an expression :) I hope you like this... I dedicate this to my bestfriend (Pauline Grace) she never let me cry in every trials we move :)

Reviews

[Patrick Gerlits]

What path might we be on that we need that omnipresent light to illuminate the way so we may not stumble over what's in front of us. Though that light must come in due time so not to spoil the surprise!

Almost as though the clouds block the light to make it harder to see, than rain comes to wash away to clues on our path! And thus we look to the clouds harbingers of depression for we know what is to come!

Oh how nice it is to have that friend amidst the sobbing clouds! So that we are not alone in the struggles that present themselves.

That is how this particular poem spoke to me, I hope this was the intent.

[Sami Khalil]

Sooo nice and well penned. I like the message within...:)

[Thea]

Aw, this is really great, Gene...So much sincerity...Such words you used...Very well said and expressed...It's great to have a friend who will always be right beside you no matter what happens. Excellent workkkkk~ :)))))))))))))))

[Kuhr Gred]

TUT welcome back to my profile! :) I miss your motivating comments.. see yah

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to follow the least walked path. Mystery and beauty is for the lucky. I did a lot of free climbing in my young days. I found beautiful hidden waterfalls and met many hawks. I like the desire and the ending. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Pax]

friendship is the best bond to treasured....you are indeed a friend... I'm sure she will appreciate your message to her...Life is full of trials...true in every word... she will hold on to your wisdom... Great Poem..

[Kuhr Gred]

this is a constructive comment in my poem.. and I really appreciate the way how you analyze my piece... :) - Kuhr gred

[Pax]

oh..thanks..but its just my thoughts...and what i see in you...I've read some of your writings before...

[Timeless-Chan]

Love the first 3 lines:) "I follow my path, Filled with mysteries, I'm waiting for light..." arent we all waiting for some light to reveal the path hidden to us? beautiful poem! very elegant! great work:D
~Dreamer

[Kuhr Gred]

your welcome :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hi Khur Gred, This is a lovely poem with balance and poise. It flows well and has a gentle feel like water trickling over rocks. It quietly exudes sadness.

[Kuhr Gred]

yeah.. your correct :) .. you got the point of my poem.. thanks ^^

[Jason Dyer]

I enjoy the ambition and hope expressed here.

[Steven Cash]

Very nice girl

[Kuhr Gred]

thanks.. ^^