Homesick

As I looked,

A cold night sky

My gentle hands, shaking

Searching for a light

I feel every single sound

The rhythm of friendship

That makes me smile

Feels like home

Since I met them

My heart reminds me

My restricted shell is over

Through darkness, I couldn't see

They made me new

They treat me like family

They  made me happy, everyday

But now, I faced in a reality

I thought, it wont end anymore

Like a candle, It will end soon

Cause I feel Homesick

Author's Note

i miss them so much :/ ... thanks for reviewing :)

Reviews

[Desmund Tiny]

sorry kung late ung review ko ha..... miss na rin kita!!!

this one is very touching and I love how the emotions flow in this poem..... pero napansin ko teh mahilig kang gumamit ng comma..... apansin ko lang naman hehehehhe great write.....

[Thea]

Aw...This is really touching...I miss you too... :3
I love this...Such emotions flowed here very well...
Great work!
:)))

[luna11]

really nice poem :D