Intimate Friend

A souvenir of the past

Holding on One's desire

The truth seekers of life

Through thousand miles

I call to my mind

All joyous reminiscence

Flows from my spirit

You will be my inspiration 

Even you're not by side

I'm ready to give my hand

In any game we move

Running to finish line

And I'll wait the day

Till we meet again!

Author's Note

Thanks for review! I hope you like this.. I made this for my beloved friend because you're one of my inspiration ;)

Reviews

[Becky]

I liked the writing, but the formatting kind of threw me for a loop. (Not sure if I just used that correctly..Oh well.) Anyway, that's just me. I tend to have issues reading really large font. It overloads my brain or something.

Good job anyway! The message is so sweet and inspirational, which is very refreshing amid all the depressing poems out there.

[Gurdeep...The Lost]

Realy a nice ode to a freind!...)

[$êlvån]

Sweet one..enjoyed reading it:)

[$êlvån]

Sweet one..enjoyed reading it:)

[Layla Anne Massaro]

You seem to be a really great friend. If I were one of your list, I would really appreciate it. Cool work. xx

[Leslie Philibert]

Nice poem with an interesting syntax and lots of good ideas

[flyingdreams]

Truth seekers of life through a thousand miles. Truly loved that phrase. it reminded me of my age long friends. Thanks for that.

[Thea]

A really nice poem...Thanks for making this...I'm so deeply touched...
:)))

[dan nacario]

wow...amazing poem..keep it up.

[Wondering Mind]

sweet sentiment.

[Jed Sabffle]

This is refreshing!
A nice poem to be addressed to your friends
And I love the wistful ending of this poem
Nice work! Keep writing!