Meteor Shower

It won't last till the end ;)

When I open my eyes

Through prussian blue sky

I heard a sweet atmosphere

Along the road of fantasy

On your simple journey

You made our world

Thousand of smiles

Flying around the sky

In my naked eye

You're invisible

But in my shadow

You're visible forever

Like a meteor shower

I'm searching in everywhere

To find you and To whisper

From my little voice

Till the last second drop!

Author's Note

i dedicate this poem to my friend... Lourdes! having a birthday this coming April 27! i hope you liked this.. it is simple but meaningful.. ;) "thanks for viewing"

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

The simple words translate to a bigger vision painted. The color sets it all off on the right tone and brings the reader to the point made.

[Poppie Mira]

yes, simple but meaningful.

[Amata Luna]

Nice words Kuhr. Your imagery is just amazing. Your friend is truly blessed to have a friend like you. This is sweet and good. Meaningful indeed. :)

[Gurdeep...The Lost]

I must say dear, lucky r ur friends that thy have such a sweet person who writes beautiful poems for them.....))

[Desmund Tiny]

nice write....

[$êlvån]

Gr8 choice of words.nyc write

[Wondering Mind]

Beautiful imagery! I'm sure your friend will love it.

[Suditi]

Wow!
This is so beautiful. :)

[flyingdreams]

thousand of smiles flying around the sky........
that is a beautiful image

[Thea]

Aw...That was really sweet and creative...
She MUST read this! I bet she'll totally like it especially the color! Haha! XD
Great work, Kuhr Gred! :p
:)))