Go with the flow

My crony told me

About her life quote

"Go with the flow"

Has I heard it

From her own voice

My soul began to petrify

And I can't understand why?

An expression of ideas

A motto of a reality

A phrase of a message

A word of a choice

And quote of a challenge

Sometimes, I made a decision

That makes me upset

I even lose a hope easily

Or close my ears

From a spectral noise

An uproar makes me down

A rattle makes me crack

And a noise makes me crash

Because Life is like a river rapids

That, you need to hold on

So you won't fall.

But all of this things is a reality

Still, Let's make it easy

Just like her quote

"Go with the flow"

Author's Note

Inspired from an advice of a friend (Azenath) <3 enjoy! ;)
and may last poem this month!

Reviews

[Monica-Antoinetta-Magda..]

lovely, true and inspirational (: keep it up

[Coyote Poetry]

"Go with the flow"
Sometime good to go with the flow. Sometime good to walk another path. Sometime people walking to a dead-end and you can't stop them. A interesting poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Amata Luna]

(a round of applause)

hahaha. You've done well and good Kuhr. Yeah, sometimes you have to go with the flow. Yeah, you are in the flow but you are not of it. Just hang on. ;) Choices that you make either make you alive or kills you into every negative. Things had not been actually easy. But God will help you for sure. Even if you're on the flow, He will make things work in all accord for you. You are very talented and creative when it comes to these things. Your forte it is, :D sharing it is just wonderful. Life is indeed a river and if you are one then choose to be clean so that others may drink from you and live a better life than what has been for them.

Medyo parang malalim yata yung sinabi ko pero in short, maganda yung tula. Sumunod ka sa agos, pero kung alam mong mali, iyon yung time para tayuan mo yung tama at gawin ang nararapat, okay? :))

wew. what a long review. , anyway, I enjoyed it.

with all

[Thea]

So true...We just have to go with the flow yet follow what our heart desires...Things happen for one big reason, either good or bad but don't ever forget, it's in His will...A wonderful poem, Kuhr Gred. I appreciate how creative your mind is with this kind of things. Thanks for once again sharing a piece of art to us.
:)))

[luna11]

Wow. I like it.
"An expression of ideas
A motto of a reality
A phrase of a message
A word of a choice
And quote of a challenge"
Great lines :)
X

[tk]

Yeah, that's a really good motto. :) makes us think that no matter how difficult life is, we'll just have to go on. :) thanks for sharing this, Genie!
(galing pala kay aze yun xD)
this inspired me. :))))

[Queen Empress]

Go with the Flow! an inspiring quote!! Keep it up!!
it makes life easier when you think about it :))

[Suditi]

The third stanza is amazing!
I love the essence, the theme of the poem.
Great job :D

[BMColey]

u really went with the flow on this piece. very nice

[Underestimated]

A very interesting quote: Go with the flow. It can be right or wrong whichever way you use it. I like how you portrayed that here.